介词丢失/错误

6.2%

1) Well, I prefer living in the countryside for [to] in a big city

2) I can get a job of [in] a famous company.

3) Much, much more easy (词汇搭配错误，easier) to go to a restaurant, [to] have some meals

4) It's really helpful for me to hunt [for] a good job.

5) If you want to get something in [去掉] somewhere,

名词使用错误

13.1%

1) I can watch some movie [movies]; we can improve the quality of our life [lives].

2) I have many chance [chances] to meet various people

3) have a relaxed [relaxation]

4) I mean there are a lot of famous university [universities] in the big city.

5) a soccer field [soccer fields]

6) I prefer living in the country [countryside].

7) Firstly, I think the big city can provide more and more (用法错误，一个more) opportunity [opportunities] to find better jobs.

8) I will I will have more approaches [access] to some, you know large stores, um, hospitals and also some something.

9) I'm a people[person] who really like [likes-主谓不一致] to go to the concert.

动词/形容词使用错误

11.7%

1) well, I prefer to live in the big city because live [living] in the city is very convenient

2) show every [our-语音识别错误] emotion (?) and thinking [think]

3) be very happy happiness [去掉，happiness] and pleasure [pleased].

4) much more easy [easier]to go to a restaurant

we can just ride a bicycle. Um, to [go to] another place.

5) And we [can] have [do] many activities with our friends.

6) And besides living in the urban area can makes [make] my [去掉my-指代错误，教育资源变得更容易获取，抽象的泛指教育，不是我的教育] education more accessible.

7) So you can you can become more [去掉] stronger；

8) there are many [much] population in the [冠词错误，去掉] big cities.

代词使用错误

4.8%

1) Well, I prefer to live in a big city. Um, as a high school student, it [代词指代不明] would be time consuming.

2) So I can have I can have a better educational environment and disadvantage [this advantage?] this [代词指代不明] advanced technologies can help me can stimulate my interest in learning.

3) uh, big city, maybe it is [去掉] very convenient.应去掉“it”，此时不需要代词，已存在主语

搭配不当

15.2%

1) we'll fill [词汇错误，feel much pleasure [pressure] [搭配不当，不能feel pleasure)，应该为feel pleased] 2) everything is in a slow slopes [pace] 3) quality environment [the environment is in good quality] 5) the countryside people [people in the countryside] because they (句子成分缺失，are] always friendly. 6) they need to go to the job [go to work]. 7) we can let our life become more abundant [make our lives more colorful/ rich/diversified] 8) And we can have[do]many sports to uh, uh, to have the [去掉-不特指] entertainment [fun]. 9) you can have a more earning [better-paying-词汇搭配错误] job. 10) the better facilities system [去掉system-词汇搭配不当] and transportation pop [transportation hub] in public.

主谓一致

6.9%

1) because they have to compete for their job [stay competitive in order to maintain their jobs-意思表述不清楚，词汇使用错误] job [jobs] every day

2) Because uh, countryside have [has] less pressure

3) I can’t [can] find the jobs that is [are] better than in the countryside. [I can find better jobs in the city-句子结构错误]

4) It only cost [takes-主谓不一致且词汇使用不当] me 30 minutes to commute every day.