成分残缺，句子不完整

9.7%

1) because I like to make friends very much, especially I want to make friends with [people from-句子成分残缺不全] all over the world.

2) and living in the city [are-缺谓语] under great pressure

3) Not like [people in the] big city.

such as [词汇错误，for example] can [主语缺失，you can]go shopping easily.

4) because this last [?] air pollution of the cars [in the city is very serious and damaging to my body-句子不完整].

5) [when] It comes to the topic about living in a big city[or in the countryside-句子不完整或改成when it comes to whether we should live in a city or countryside].

6) Maybe [去掉-用词不当] you can have access to the uh, medical [添加service-句子成分残缺]

7) Well I prefer to live in a big city, this [is-缺谓语] because I think it is more convenient.

And so I can [get-缺谓语] a better education in a big city.

句式结构错误

11.7%

1) but the country life is more relaxing than the city [life in the countryside is more relaxing than that in the city]

2) I think the big city is better than the living in the countryside. [living in a big city is better than living in the countryside-句型结构错误]

3) And there's all nearby us [And those are all within easy reach，句式结构错误].

4) I can go to a library or museum very convenient [It is convenient for me to go to a library or museum-句子结构错误]

5) So if I need to uh prepare a paper, I can just search the Information in this place is very convenient with [which is very convenient].