| 原文 | 译文 | 改译 |
| 例15：……在师父和师兄弟们心里 留下了无限的悲凉和无奈 | Myself and the rest of the band were all wracked with sorrow and hopelessness. | The rest of the band and I were wracked with sorrow and hopelessness. |
| 例16：八台那场面可大 气势也高 | For a really big occasion, important, high energy. | For really big occasion, it presents with high energy. |
| 例17：大庄叔 过来喝水 | Uncle, come have some water. | Uncle, have some water. |
| 例18：如今你都二十四五的人了 连个对象都没有 | Come on, you’re almost twenty-five and still no girlfriend! | Come on, you’re almost 25 and you got no girlfriend! |
| 例19：妈 我给师父发过誓的 | Ma, I swore a vow to my master. | Ma, I swore to my master. |
| 例20：你何必一条道跑到黑呢 | Why should you trap yourself sticking to one path? | Why do you trap yourself on one path? |